Monica+C.+Eleven

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Rachel cried when they made her wear an ugly sweater that did not belong to her. Rachael got mad and she wanted to just forget this day be another day, but she thought about her mom making her a cake and when her dad came home they would open presents and eat cake. “My face all hot and spit coming out of my mouth”. I think that Rachel is credible because she acts like a person her age would act about a sweater that is not hers.=====

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Also, Rachel’s birthday got ruined. Her birthday got ruined because Mrs. Price made her wear a sweater that was not hers and then she got really mad.This made Rachel get mad because it was not her sweater and she got in trouble and it was not hers. Many people would feel the same way as Rachel “I want this day to be fare away from me I just wish that I was 102 years old”. This also makes her credible because I sometimes wished that the day went on really fast.=====

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In addition, the sweater belonged to Phyllis Lopez. I think this is unfair because she got blamed for something that did not belong to her.“The worst part is that when the bell rings that stupid Phyllis Lopez remembers that the sweater is hers”. This makes her credible because she acts like a person that would be made at there teacher because they made her put on a sweater that did not belong to her. this makes=====