Eddie+eleven+essay

Anzora, Eddie Ferbrary26/09 Per.4 Eleven The name of the story is Eleven and the authors name is Sandra Cisneros. The story is about this girl named Rachel that everything gets ruin because of this stupid red sweater. Rachel is credible because she doesn’t like the red sweater and I think any kid would do that if it were not theirs. The first reason why Rachel is credible character because she didn’t like the sweater. An ugly sweater like, that, all raggedy and old, but Mrs. Price believes her. The second reason that Rachel is credible character is because she can’t talk when the teacher gives her the sweater. Sometimes that happens to a lot of people when they don’t want anything that is not theirs it like they can’t talk the correct form of English.Thats not, I don’t, you’re not…not mine. The last reason that Rachel is credible is because she got force to do what she didn’t want to do. And that happens to many people all the times. Of course it’s yours, Mrs. Price says I remember you wearing it once. Rachel is a credible character because the story is about Rachel’s birthday that got ruin by this stupid red sweater. Then when she gets home her cake got ruin too.