Israel+Eleven

Alcaraz, Israel Feb.27, 2009 Period2/3 Eleven essay Sandra Cisneros wrote “Eleven”. This story is about an eleven year old who has a terrible day at school but the worst part is today is her birthday. She is credible. My first example of her being credible is ‘you put on that sweater on right now and no more nonsense.’ But its not …’’ ‘Now!” This is credible because any eleven wants to respond to their teacher but their teacher sometimes doesn’t want to hear it. Another example that she is credible is “I wish I was 102 years old”. She is credible because she used a metaphor meaning she wants to get away from this problem. Any one would feel that way in a bad situation. My final reason that she is credible is that she is always sad. That is credible because some people spend their entire life being sad.