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SEPTEMBER 29, 2006 PREWRITE #1

1) I AM GOOD AT ACTING AND MAKING PEOPLE LAUGH. 2) I FEEL VERY EXICTED AND VERY HAPPY. 3) I WOULD FEEL VERY SAD AND ALSO I WOULD BE VERY BORED.

OCTOBER 4,2006 BOY OF THE PAINTED CAVE CHAPTER #1

1) ONE OF THE PROBLEMS IN THE STORY WAS THAT THE PEOPLE WERE STARVING BECAUSE TAO LOST THE RABBIT. THE SECOND PROBLEM IN THE STORY WAS THAT THE LITTLE WOLF DOG WAS ALONE AND STARVIN', BUT HE OR SHE DIDN'T WANT TO EAT.

2) I THINK THAT THE RESOLUTION FOR THE STARVIN' VILLAGE WILL BE THAT THE VILLAGE IS SOON TO HAVE MORE FOOD. FOR THY OTHER ONE I THINK THAT THE RESOLUTION FOR THE LITTLE WOLF DOG IS GOING TO FIND TAOAND TAO IS GOING TO HELP IT.

CHAPTER #2-#3

3) I AM VOLT I WOULD I WOULD BE VERY MAD AND SUPER ANGREY. I WOULD FEEL THIS BECAUSE TAO WAS SPEAKING TO ME (VOLT) LIKE IF HE DOESN'T CARE ABOUT THIS CLAN. ALSO HE HUNTED WITH AN EVIL WOLF DOG. AND HE KEPT AND HE WAS ON THIN ICE. ALL HE NEEDED WAS TO DISRESPECT ME AND HE WOULD BE IN MORTAL DANGER BY ME.

CHAPTER #8 OCTOBER 12, 2006 1) THERE IS A WOMAN WHO WANTS TO BE THE PRESIDENT, BUT SOCIETY'S RULES SAYS NO. SHE IS REALLY GOOD AT MAKING DECISIONS NOT LIKE PRESIDENT BUSH (BOO), BUT THEY STILL WOULD'N'T VOTE FOR HER. I THINK THAT SHE SHOULD DREES UP LIKE A MAN JUST WHEN SHE IS IN THE WHITE HOUSE. OTHER TIMES WHEN SHE'S NOT IN THE W.H. SHE SHE COULD BE A WOMAN AGAIN. SHE WILL ONLY BE A MAN FOR THE VOTES AND THE BALLOT.

CHAPTER #11 OCTOBER 18, 2006 1) I THINK THAT GRAYBEARD IS A GOOD TEACHER. I THINK THIS BECAUSE HE IS STILL TEACHING TAO HOW TO DRAW ON THE WALLS. ALSO HE IS REALLY A NICE OLD MAN. 2) I WOULDN'T LIKE TO BE TEACHED BY GRAYBEARD BECAUSE HE TOLD TAO EVERY LITTLE TINY DETAIL ABOUT DRAWING THE SPIRIT ANIMALS ON THE WALLS. IF I WAS TAO, I WOULDN'T WANT TO BE A CHOSEN ONE, ALL I WANT TO DO IS DRAW ON THE WALLS NOT GRAFFITE JUST FOR FUN.

THE GIVER Chapter 1 December 6,2006 Quote:"When the class took their seats at the conclusion of the patriotic hymn, Asher remained standing to make his public apology as was required." Response:Some people will stand every day to say that they are sorry... or something else? I think that this reptition is fine because as long he keeps on goofing off, he will still have to make an apology everyday until he stops goofing off, or would he thats my opinion. Chapter 2 December 6,2006 Quote:"The children all received their bicycles at Nine; they were not allowed to ride to ride bicycles before then." Respone:The "Elders" think that the Nines are responsable-sp. enough becuase they could be able to learn faster than any younger age, of course the older kids & adults will already know how to ride it once they get them. This is my opinion and this is what I think.I think that the "Elders" might care if the younger (8,7,6,5's...ect.) ones will get hurt. I also think that if the little one(s) will break their bone(s), and if they do they wont be able to do their volunteer hours that means that they won't have an "Assingment."