Tomothy's+Essay+Eleven

The name of the story is called Eleven and it was written by Sandra Cisneros. The book is about girl named Rachel that acts like a 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 year old. She was credible because she cries about things that isn’t a big deal. These are why reasons why she isn’t credible. First, she cries about wearing coat that smells like cottage cheese. I would expect an any childish person to cry about something like that. But not a tough person would cry. But Rachel isn’t tough so I would know someone like her would cry. On to the next reason. Then, when the teacher was going to give the jacket Rachel (which is not hers) she was to shy to talk. All she said was “That’s not, I don’t, you’re not… not mine”. Kids that are shy usually say things twice and wrong. She also took a long time to say not and not again. That is another reason she is credible Finally, the last reason is that she says dumb and stupid .Mostly in her current age kids would say things like that. I is obvious the that is credible. Nowadays kids from 10-35 say those words. That’s a the reasons why Rachel is credible. In conclusion, Rachel is a credible for many reasons .