emmanuel+eleven

Mejia, Emmanuel Period 2/3 Feb 26, 09 Eleven emmanuel The story is about this girl named Rachel how just trend 11 years old and her birthday was ruined by a old ,ugly, and smelly sweater. In this story the main character is a credible person because that’s what a normal 11 year old would do. She cries, gets up set , and doesn’t want to put on other peoples old clothes. A reason because she is credible is because a normal 11 year old girl would have cried if the teacher yelled at them. probably a 11 year old boy would have cried to. ‘’Rachel’’ Mrs. Price says. She said it like if she was getting angry. “”put on your sweater right now and no more none sense.””