eleven

Eleven

LaMont Macon Period: 4/5

In class we are reading a story called Eleven its about a girl named Rachel and a teacher named Ms. Price who is very mean to her and make her wear a sweater that's not hers. I think that Rachel is a credible person to prove this I have 3 examples of Rachel being a credible person.

One because Rachel argues that the sweater is not hers “not mine not mine not mine not mine”. Parents and kids argue too so that's 1 reason why Rachel is a credible person.

Rachel gets mad at the teacher for not listening to her and trying to prove she is right “my face all hot…”. People get mad at each other all the time so thats reason 2.

Rachel starts crying “and then all of a sudden I start crying in front of every body. Everyone cry's its ok to cry so thats reason 3. My conclusion is that Rachel is a credible person because she can do all these things.

Eleven LaMont Macon Period: 4/5   In class we are reading a story called Eleven and was written by Sandra Cisneros. It is about a girl named Rachel and a teacher named Ms. Price who is very mean to her and does not likes to be wrong. I have 3 examples of Rachel being a credible person.  Rachel argues that the sweater is not hers “not mine not mine not mine not mine”. This proves that Rachel is credible because she argues people argue all the time over stuff.  Rachel gets mad at the teacher for not listening to her and trying to prove she is right “my face all hot…”This proves that Rachel is credible because people get really mad some times.   Rachel starts crying “and then all of a sudden I start crying in front of every body. This proves that she is credible because she cries everyone cries.  My conclusion is that Rachel is a credible person because she can do all these things.