boy+of+the+painted+cave+review

1.Simile: Wild vacant stare.Compare: They are comparing a regular stare to a wild vacant stare.
Alike: They are alike because they are both stares. -4 not a simile 2.Simile: Towering over him like a ominous shadow. Compare: They are comparing how tall Saxon is to how long a shadow is. Alike: They are the same height. 3.Volt feels guilty because his wife died. 4.Yes some change one revealed. One revealed is Volt being a father another one is being a leader of the valley people. -4 these things aren't changes. Also, you don't mention his qualities 5.b: P.Tao wants to be an artist, but drawing is a taboo for all except Chosen Ones. R.Tao becomes a Chosen One. E.Since you have to be picked by the elders or be the son of a leader.Volt is Tao's father(which is at the end of the book if you did not read it).Thus this allows Tao becomes a Chosen One. -1 How did Tao's qualities lead to this resolution c. P:Tao wants to know more about his father. R:He finds out about his parents.(his mother[dead] and Volt his father[alive)] E.Kala tells him about his mother.Tao figures out that Volt is is father(which is the third time I told you).And Volt tells him more about his mother.Thus he Iearned about his parents. -1 How did Tao's qualities lead to this resolution d. P:Tao thinks hunting with a wolf dog is a good idea,but dogs are taboo for his clan. R.Wolf dogs are allowed at the end of the story. E.Volt thinks wolf dogs are evil(or bad spirits[or curse]).At the and Ram saves Volt and Volt thinks the "curse" has been lifted thus making wolf dogs allowed. e. P:The leader do not realize that Tao was following Graybeard's instructions,and they seek to punish him for breaking taboos. R:he becomes a cave painter and they find out he was following Graybeards instructions. E.He faces Saxon the sacred bull beats him,finds out more of his mother,figures out his father was Graybeard,and he becomes a cave painter or Chosen One. = = -1 How did Tao's qualities lead to this resolution

22/33 good job!