Izabel's+persuasive+essay

Dear Mom, You know the question I will ask you so why not say yes? We already have three dogs and a lot of experience so we can always squeeze one more into the family. Since we already have Alma, Angie, and Angel we would be like professionals. I know that it is a big responsibility, but I’m positive that I can handle taking care of it without slacking off and leaving it for someone else to do. I also know that we just got Angel, but that’s not a problem. Since you might not approve, here are some reasons as to why we could use another buddy in the house.

A puppy is always a good companion and best friend for anyone. Dogs teach responsibility and discipline to any child who needs a little improvement with their attitude. We could always make more money with another dog. Once the puppy has babies, we can sell them and make a lot of money. We can always keep one or two of them just if we wanted to have a little more company and fun around the house. Puppies are a good idea to have because they teach a valuable lesson and that lesson is, someone always needs to have fun in their life no matter how young or old you are. Nothing can make a person feel better than having something to love when all alone and miserable.

They are so cute and cuddly, but puppies are a lot of hard work to handle. Puppies always leave a little present for you to clean up. But I can promise you that once I spend time with it, I’m sure that it won’t happen anymore. (Maybe once in a while, but that’s okay.) The puppy might also cost a lot of money, but it is worth it to buy a puppy and know that you make everyone happier and healthier. And plus, we could all chip in for the puppy and then it won’t be hard to pay so much money by yourself. You might also think that we won’t have enough room for it. I can reassure you that my room will be just fine. I could clear a space big enough for it to walk around, play, and sleep there. Just like Angel, we could always make room for the new puppy. Even though there might be trouble in getting this puppy, but it’s worth the wait.

In conclusion, we absolutely need to get this puppy. Even though there might be some trouble with it, we can always train it to know what’s right and wrong. I’m sure that Alma, Angie, and Angel won’t mind another friend. I’m positive that Margo, Edward, and Dad won’t mind much either. So before you disapprove, please give it some thought before your final decision, because it would really mean a lot to the others and I, if we had an extra member to the family. So, I will ask this question one more time (and please think about it before you answer), Can we have another puppy, PLEASE!!!! Sincerely, Izabel