Eleven+meliza+l

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Eleven the story was written by Sandra Cisneros. The story is about a girl (Rachel) whose teacher forces her to do something and ruins her birthday. The three things that make her seem credible are that she is shy, she feels like a lot of ages, and she has to wear a nasty sweater. ======

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One of my reasons why she was credible was that she is shy because the teacher tells her to wear an ugly sweater. This makes her seem credible because of this quote, ”That’s not I don’t, you’re not… not mine.” You know that there is a lot of people who just don’t say anything and have to do things they don’t really have to do. ======

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Next she feels like she is a lot of ages. In the story she seems like a lot of ages because she starts to cry just for a little reason. Even some people in real life like to be a like childish by crying, playing with toys, and maybe seeing little kids shows. ======

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Last she has to wear a nasty sweater. Of course she had to do it because her teacher made her wear it. Most of the time people have to obey things to what people tell them to do. ======

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This story will tell you that you can be any age and still have the ages inside of you.  Now you know that Rachel is a credible person. ======