Sidney+''Becky''

Ortega, Sidney

March 3, 2009

Period 4-5

Becky Essay

The story’s name is “Becky and the Wheels-and-Brake Boys” this story was written by James Berry. It is about a girl named Becky who wants a bike ,but she can’t have one. Becky is a credible character because of how she acts, how she feels, and what she says.

First of all, Becky begs for what she wants. As Becky says, “Over and over I told my mom I wanted a bike.” She really wants a bike more than anything, so she asks to her mom. This proves that Becky is a realistic character because a lot of kids beg and bug their parents for what they want. Secondly, she fights with her friend. Becky thinks to herself, “For the first time Shirnette and me had a real fight because of what I hated most.” She was mad at best friend (Shirnette) let a cockroach fly down her blouse. She is credible because friends frequently fight with each other.

Thirdly, she asks for help to learn how to ride a bike. Becky asks The Wheels-and-Brake Boys, “Can somebody teach me to ride?” Becky doesn’t have a bike because girls in her neighborhood aren’t encouraged to ride them. She asks The Wheels-and-Brake Boys if someone can teach her how to ride a bike because she wants to be a part of their group. She’s believable because she stands up for what she wants just like any kid would.

In conclusion Becky is a realistic character because of her actions, emotions, and her words prove she is a credible character. You might know someone like Becky in your neighborhood that acts like her, or it might be you!